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	<title>Comments on: So you want to write for Harlequin Presents &#8211; Part 6</title>
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		<title>By: Lynn Raye Harris</title>
		<link>http://www.lynnrayeharris.com/2009/09/04/so-you-want-to-write-for-harlequin-presents-part-6/comment-page-1/#comment-3062</link>
		<dc:creator>Lynn Raye Harris</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 08 Sep 2009 13:06:42 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi, Jo!  You&#039;re welcome! :)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi, Jo!  You&#8217;re welcome! <img src='http://www.lynnrayeharris.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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		<title>By: Lynn Raye Harris</title>
		<link>http://www.lynnrayeharris.com/2009/09/04/so-you-want-to-write-for-harlequin-presents-part-6/comment-page-1/#comment-3061</link>
		<dc:creator>Lynn Raye Harris</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 08 Sep 2009 13:06:27 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi, Marilyn!  Thank you!  I love helping people out.  :)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi, Marilyn!  Thank you!  I love helping people out.  <img src='http://www.lynnrayeharris.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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		<title>By: Lynn Raye Harris</title>
		<link>http://www.lynnrayeharris.com/2009/09/04/so-you-want-to-write-for-harlequin-presents-part-6/comment-page-1/#comment-3060</link>
		<dc:creator>Lynn Raye Harris</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 08 Sep 2009 13:05:41 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Oh gee, good luck, Amy!  I do understand the pains of fighting a synopsis!  Just focus on the emotional conflict between the characters.  That&#039;s the most important thing in these books. :)  (I always start sneaking plot things in; I&#039;m getting myself out of the habit though.)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Oh gee, good luck, Amy!  I do understand the pains of fighting a synopsis!  Just focus on the emotional conflict between the characters.  That&#8217;s the most important thing in these books. <img src='http://www.lynnrayeharris.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' />   (I always start sneaking plot things in; I&#8217;m getting myself out of the habit though.)</p>
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		<title>By: Jo</title>
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		<dc:creator>Jo</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 05 Sep 2009 09:58:01 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>This has been a great series, thanks so much for making the time to post your advice.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>This has been a great series, thanks so much for making the time to post your advice.</p>
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		<title>By: Marilyn Shoemaker</title>
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		<dc:creator>Marilyn Shoemaker</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 05 Sep 2009 02:27:06 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>This has certainly been an endeavor of love Lynn Raye and what a wonderful thing you&#039;ve done for aspiring authors.

Bravo!

xxoo</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>This has certainly been an endeavor of love Lynn Raye and what a wonderful thing you&#8217;ve done for aspiring authors.</p>
<p>Bravo!</p>
<p>xxoo</p>
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		<title>By: Amy Strnad</title>
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		<dc:creator>Amy Strnad</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 04 Sep 2009 20:03:30 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Fabulous series, Lynn. Though I&#039;m targeting MH (and looking forward to Kimberly&#039;s posts), the information has been very helpful. Your encouraging tone has been a breath of fresh air while I&#039;m suffering thru my *&amp;@#  synopsis and hating everything I write.  Oh well, back to the computer for a little more self-flagellation as I attempt to convey a whole books worth of conflict (and the &quot;whys and wherefores&quot;) in a riveting two pages. - Ha!

Amy</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Fabulous series, Lynn. Though I&#8217;m targeting MH (and looking forward to Kimberly&#8217;s posts), the information has been very helpful. Your encouraging tone has been a breath of fresh air while I&#8217;m suffering thru my *&amp;@#  synopsis and hating everything I write.  Oh well, back to the computer for a little more self-flagellation as I attempt to convey a whole books worth of conflict (and the &#8220;whys and wherefores&#8221;) in a riveting two pages. &#8211; Ha!</p>
<p>Amy</p>
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		<title>By: Lynn Raye Harris</title>
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		<dc:creator>Lynn Raye Harris</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 04 Sep 2009 19:35:47 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hey, Gibb.  Not all that long ago, I was an aspiring author too.  I understand how important it is to get information you can use to improve your craft!  I&#039;m glad this is helping--sounds like you know what you&#039;re doing.  Eliminating redundant info, increasing tension--very good choices. :)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hey, Gibb.  Not all that long ago, I was an aspiring author too.  I understand how important it is to get information you can use to improve your craft!  I&#8217;m glad this is helping&#8211;sounds like you know what you&#8217;re doing.  Eliminating redundant info, increasing tension&#8211;very good choices. <img src='http://www.lynnrayeharris.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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		<title>By: Lynn Raye Harris</title>
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		<dc:creator>Lynn Raye Harris</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 04 Sep 2009 19:33:31 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi, Barbara!  Glad it&#039;s working for you. :)  And of course, finish working forward before going back to look at the beginning.  I often do that, and often change the beginning!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi, Barbara!  Glad it&#8217;s working for you. <img src='http://www.lynnrayeharris.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' />   And of course, finish working forward before going back to look at the beginning.  I often do that, and often change the beginning!</p>
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		<title>By: gibb</title>
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		<dc:creator>gibb</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 04 Sep 2009 17:45:49 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hey there

Awesome job on this btw.  I couldn&#039;t get to your site yesterday but am glad I could today.  From reading your notes on the subject and the iheart presents site, I&#039;ve been revising like mad.  Tossed this and that out - condensed the first three chapters - eliminated redundant info - worked to increase tension.  Man, it&#039;s alot of work, but very fun.  Keep up the good job.  Aspiring writers appreciate it.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hey there</p>
<p>Awesome job on this btw.  I couldn&#8217;t get to your site yesterday but am glad I could today.  From reading your notes on the subject and the iheart presents site, I&#8217;ve been revising like mad.  Tossed this and that out &#8211; condensed the first three chapters &#8211; eliminated redundant info &#8211; worked to increase tension.  Man, it&#8217;s alot of work, but very fun.  Keep up the good job.  Aspiring writers appreciate it.</p>
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		<title>By: Barbara Burnham</title>
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		<dc:creator>Barbara Burnham</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 04 Sep 2009 17:34:10 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Well, this confirms my suspicion that I probably need to change the first few paragraphs of my current WIP. I made notes and will go back to it later. 

Need to keep writing. . . 

Thanks for the great posts, Lynn!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Well, this confirms my suspicion that I probably need to change the first few paragraphs of my current WIP. I made notes and will go back to it later. </p>
<p>Need to keep writing. . . </p>
<p>Thanks for the great posts, Lynn!</p>
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